Title: Big Package
Baby it’s cold outside…but things are about to heat up.
I missed the last bus to my sister’s for Christmas, and now I'm stranded in a bus station—in the middle of a blizzard—with a giant package covered in naughty wrapping paper.
Then he shows up: Kalen Welles, the football star from my high school fantasies—and offers me a ride.
Just when the car is getting cozy, the roads get shut down due to snow.
Luckily there’s a nearby cabin where we can hole up for the night.
A warm fireplace, cozy blankets, pent-up longing we both spent years ignoring… maybe I’ll be able to unwrap Kalen's big package before Christmas morning.
But when the snow clears and the ice melts, will the former football star and the shy nerd finally get a happy ending?
Unwrap this sexy holiday story from Opal Carew!
Author: Opal Carew
Other books by this author that we've reviewed: Meat, Nailed
Published by Swerve Source: Publisher
Published: October 25th 2016
Genres: Contemporary Romance, Erotic Contemporary Romance, Erotic Short
Pages: 131 pages
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Holly is headed to visit her sister for Christmas. She’s given a big package from her ex-boyfriend at the bus station which causes her to miss her bus. Kalen is dropping his sister at the station when notices her sitting there with the big package. He recognizes her as someone he went to school with. At that time, she was overweight and he was the popular football star. He was attracted to her then, but now-she’s a knockout!
When he hears her problem, Kalen is going that way, and offers to give Holly a ride. As they head out, a snow-storm picks up and they are forced to overnight in a cozy cabin.
Holly can’t believe her luck. She’d always been crushing on Kalen and now he’s here with her! They realize there is a mutual attraction and decide to indulge. Things get a bit dicey as Holly learns Kalen has a big problem. He’s been blessed and cursed, with a rather big package. Many woman have wanted to experience that ride, but can’t follow through. Holly is up for the challenge!
Although this is a short and supposed to be tongue-in-cheek, it’s a bit dis-jointed. Holly is a forceful woman one minute and then a timid girl the next. There was no talk of protection, and some of the words used just didn’t work well for me-ex. his big billiard ball-sized head…..
Some very funny scenes unfold that had to do with the box though! Plus, there were a lot of sex scenes for such a short story, and I thought they were rather inventive. I mean, what else are you going to do stranded in a snow-storm??
I like Opal Carew and usually love her work. I enjoyed the characters and the book’s premise, the delivery just wasn’t what I expected.