Review: French Lessons by Pelaam

October 20, 2014 Review 0

Review: French Lessons by Pelaam

Caught daydreaming during night school, Jesse faces being thrown out of class or proving his worth during a one-to-one lesson. Is his French up to the standard this Master desires?

More for the sake of a friend than himself, Jesse attends a French class held in the evenings at the local college. However, in class he spends more time enjoying erotic daydreams about the sexy teacher than he does learning the language.

Too often, he’s caught not paying attention, and Corwin the French master gives Jesse an ultimatum. He'll personally assess Jesse's skills during a one-to-one session for Jesse to prove he’s worthy to continue. If Jesse fails to impress Corwin, he'll be kicked out of class.

Jesse accepts the challenge, confident his French will be up to Corwin's standards. But is a lesson in French the only thing that Corwin wants to give him? Or is Jesse imagining there’s more to Corwin's words?

If not, what else is this Master likely to demand of him?

Publisher's Note: This book was previously released by another publisher. It has been revised and re-edited for release with Totally Bound Publishing.

Title: French Lessons
Published by Totally Bound
Source: Publisher
Published: 10 October, 2014
Genres: M/M Erotica
Pages: 44
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Stars: two-half-stars
Flames: four-flames

A student/teacher story with a touch of BDSM this hot story was really just that: told from Jesse’s point of view, without much character or emotional development.  Going in, I knew this was a short story and my own experience has proven that these can be hit or miss in terms of depth and quality.

Not bad, but not as good as it could have been, Pelaam uses wine and food discussions and choices to substitute for depth, not unlike the more pretentious foodies do in real life.  Sadly, there was so much potential for this story that went unfulfilled.

If you want some heat in a voyeuristic sense, that won’t challenge you or make any lasting impressions, this is the story for you.



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