Review: My Fair Princess (The Improper Princesses #1) by Vanessa Kelly

August 26, 2016 Review 2

Review: My Fair Princess (The Improper Princesses #1) by Vanessa Kelly

Despite being the illegitimate daughter of a prince, Gillian Dryden is happily ignorant of all social graces. After growing up wild in Italy, Gillian has been ordered home to England to find a suitable husband. And Charles Valentine Penley, the excessively proper, distractingly handsome Duke of Leverton, has agreed to help transform her from a willful tomboy to a blushing debutante.

Powerful and sophisticated, Charles can make or break reputations with a well-placed word. But his new protégée, with her habit of hunting bandits and punching earls, is a walking scandal. The ton is aghast . . . but Charles is thoroughly intrigued. Tasked with taking the hoyden in hand, he longs to take her in his arms instead. Can such an outrageous attraction possibly lead to a fairytale ending?

Title: My Fair Princess (The Improper Princesses #1)
Author: Vanessa Kelly
Series: The Improper Princesses #1
Published by Zebra
Source: Publisher
Published: August 30, 2016
Genres: Regency Romance
Pages: 352
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Stars: three-half-stars
Flames: four-flames
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Vanessa Kelly

While I was at first put off by the heroine, I realized quickly that it was only because I was expecting something different. I love to be taken down a notch when reading something, and this book definitely called me out on my “ladies don’t hurt others” Regency mentality.

Gillian is a naive, impetuous, immature heroine – but somehow, you end up liking her anyway. She’s no wilting flower, that’s for sure, and she has a notion that she has to right the world’s wrongs. She does so in her own way, which she is absolutely sure is the right way, but it takes the Duke of Leverton (Charles) to make the reader see that her way is the worst way to go about gaining what she calls justice – but is really just revenge.

Charles is a proper Englishman, very much adhering to the rules of English society. However, Kelly created him so well that he didn’t come across as stodgy; in fact, he came across as warm, kind, and a fun guy to hang around with. Sure, he was a bit high-handed in many scenes, but it was, in my opinion, very much needed due to Gillian’s immaturity. (Seriously, the girl might’ve needed a father more than a husband, but I digress.)

The chemistry between the two was likely to explode in only one of two directions – and it didn’t go the “I can’t stand this person” route. Watching Charles reassess what was truly important, and watching Gillian grow up a bit (but not much; I was, however, left with a sense that she would grow up quickly once married and thrust into society as a duchess) was satisfying.

The steamy sexy scenes were well done, and I absolutely adored the way Gillian was with Charles. She wasn’t shy, but she wasn’t acting like she’d been raised in a brothel, either – a delicate balance, to which I give the author much props for keeping.

All in all, it was an enjoyable read. Charles and Gillian were interesting, dynamic characters, and it was fun to see the secondary characters crop up. This is my first Vanessa Kelly book, but the way in which she wrote about Gillian’s bother (and his wife) and Charles’s sister (and her husband) made me think there are stories about them (there are!!).

This was a solid 3.5 star book for me. The only thing that would’ve made it higher is if I saw more growth from Gillian – but, again, I was left with a feeling of hope that she would mature quickly.

 

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Regency Romance Author Info

Vanessa Kelly is an award-winning author who was named by Booklist, the review journal of the American Library Association, as one of the “New Stars of Historical Romance.” Her Regency-set historical romances have been nominated for awards in a number of contests, and her second book, Sex and The Single Earl, won the prestigious Maggie Medallion for Best Historical Romance. Her current series, The Renegade Royals is a national bestseller. Vanessa also writes USA Today bestselling contemporary romance with her husband, under the pen name of VK Sykes.

 

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Excerpt

The bandit scum had killed Step-papa, his two bodyguards, and the young groom accompanying him on that fateful trip through the Gorges of Tiberio. It was fitting that Gillian would deliver justice in almost the same spot where those innocents had breathed out their last moments of existence.
Her brother cursed under his breath. “Gillian, this should not be your life.”
“Do I look like a proper young lady to you?”
He cast a sardonic glance at her attire—sheepskin coat, buckskin breeches, and riding boots. “You could be. You’re an attractive, respectable-looking girl when you’re not disguised as a bloodthirsty ruffian.”
“I thought you, of all people, would understand,” she said, exasperated.
“I do, but if you continue along this course, it will take its toll. Killing always does.”
She managed not to flinch. “I don’t have a choice.”
“There is always a choice, Gillian.”
She flicked her gaze back to Falcone, who was sitting on a rock as he smoked a pipe. He was also splendidly out in the open, but she had to get closer.
“There’s no point in discussing this. I’m doing it,” she said.
“No, I will—”
“It was my fault,” she hissed. “That’s why I have to do it. No one else.”
He frowned. “I don’t understand.”
She had to swallow before she could answer. “It’s my fault that my stepfather was murdered. I sent him straight into Falcone’s line of fire.”
“So . . . it’s guilt that motivates you. Killing Falcone will likely be nothing more than an empty victory, if such is the case.” Griffin squeezed her arm. “As long as you continue to blame yourself, you will never find peace.”
She hoped to God he was wrong. He had to be wrong. “You are the most irritating man I have ever met.”
“So my wife informs me on a regular basis.”
Below them, Falcone knocked the tobacco out of his pipe and then hauled his formidable bulk to his feet. Gillian mentally cursed as he began to stroll over to join his men under the trees.
She turned and signaled to Stefano and his grandson. The old man pulled his pistol from the brace on his saddle, ready to cover her back.
“Griffin, help me or not, but I’m doing this now.” Before he could answer, she slung her rifle across her back and slithered away from the edge. As quickly as she dared, she crawled down the narrow, rutted path that ran along the rim of the gorge. If she stood, it was unlikely the men below would notice her, but she was taking no chances. Falcone had evaded her too many times over the years.
Her brother followed her. She could practically feel him seething with frustration, but he made not a sound. She had to give him credit—he was awfully good.
A few feet short of her goal, Gillian held up a hand to halt her brother’s advance. She stole a quick glance over her shoulder. Just behind them Stefano crouched, his tanned, leathery features cast into shade by his broad-brimmed hat. Griffin’s expression registered shock at the sight of the old man so close, pistols at the ready. Stefano might be getting on in years, but he was still vital and strong. He could move like a ghost, silent and lethal, at her command.
After crooking a finger to signal Griffin to follow, Gillian wriggled up to the edge of the cliff. She cautiously peered over the rocks and saw the bandits under a stand of beech trees, their attention on their flasks of wine as they waited for the rabbits to cook over the open flame. Unfortunately, Falcone was half obscured by one of his men and was partly in shade. She would have to stand up if she wanted a clear shot.
She came up in a crouch and pulled the rifle from her back. She’d already checked it three times, but did so once more. The Baker was a fine weapon. It had belonged to a Hussar, and had a light, short carbine, which made it easier to handle. But it was less accurate than rifles used by sharpshooters. Although she could reload quickly if she missed her shot, she’d make an inviting target while she did.
So get it right the first time.
Griffin came up beside her. He gave her a terse nod as he brought his rifle to bear on the men below. But he then sucked in a harsh breath when Gillian rose swiftly to her feet, taking aim at Falcone.
As bad luck would have it, an eagle soared right overhead, screeching out a cry. The men below automatically glanced up, directly at her and Griffin.
Gillian fired. The shot echoed through the gorge in a deafening report. Another boom followed as Griffin fired a second later. Falcone stumbled against a low rock, roaring as he clutched his shoulder. Another bandit went down like a sack of grain tossed from a cart.
The other bandits scrambled for their weapons.
“Get down, you daft woman,” Griffin barked, reaching to pull her away from the edge.
Gillian evaded his grasp, sliding on the rocky scree and almost losing her footing. Still, she managed to recover and reload. Griffin did the same as he let loose a string of hair-raising curses. She yanked up her rifle, took aim, and fired again.
A moment later, a bullet slammed into her shoulder, throwing her to the ground. The back of her head connected with rock, and pain exploded through her skull. Gillian lay there stunned, staring up at a sky that shimmered with a milky haze. Her ears rang with the sound of a thousand church bells.
Move, you idiot.
She couldn’t—not even one blessed finger.

2 Responses to “Review: My Fair Princess (The Improper Princesses #1) by Vanessa Kelly”

  1. Crystal, Tasty Book Tours

    Wonderful review! Thank you for hosting MY FAIR PRINCESS today!